"When Night Subsides Into A Dawning Glow"
Hello everybody, this is my first post at Sonnet Central. I've been browsing this board for 2 or 3 weeks now, and it's been really stimulating to follow your critiques and discussions.Below you'll...
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als--Aside from the fact that "loudlier" ought to be "louder" -- curse those pesky adjectives -- you've handled the English okay, although a Germanic quality clings to the sentiment. If you really...
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If you're interested, we also have a German sonnet workshop:www.fulgura.de/sonett/kar...1forum.htmRegards,David
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This is a lovely sonnet, and well written if as you say English is not your native tongue. I admire your courage to post it here.I have one little comment in this line...>>>My spirits,...
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ALS - Well done. I enjoyed.As I read L9, you have used spirits correctly.L4 - It is louder, or you could say loudly.(I'll have to try La Poetessa's tip on indents.) -Janie
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Hi,I admire anyone who can learn to converse in a second language or beyond, much less write poetry in it/them. Congrats on that. This has a sort of stilted air about it, but I wouldn't have guessed...
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Hello. I, too, am new to this group. I hope to learn about things like indenting and line spacing, etc. I like the idea of greatness being shyly announced; to me, your sonnet has elements of both...
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